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Title: A Necklace Made of Need
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~700
Warnings/Spoilers: Breathplay
Summary: It's nights like tonight that the need rises up, a hunger so dark, so thick, there's no pushing it away.
A/N: Apparently my muse only comes out of hiding when I need to go to bed. Go figure. Anyway! Had a nice, long, eventful chat with [livejournal.com profile] cormallen earlier tonight, in which I said something to the effect of, "breathplay, it's the new black in kink, for fandom". She assured me that wasn't the case at all, and there wasn't enough of it, and so basically, I'm blaming this on her. Thanks, Alex. :P Hope y'all enjoy :)





It explodes up out of you every so often, no warning, just bam, the need to remind him – remind both of you – who he is. Who he belongs to.

He's been yours since the night he was put into your arms. You sold your soul for him; he gave it back to you.

It's nights like tonight that the need rises up, a hunger so dark, so thick, there's no pushing it away. The only thing you can do is give in to it, let it roll through you until it consumes both of you.

Sam doesn't give in easily, even when it's something he wants, too. You always see the shadows of doubt, of guilt, lurking there behind his eyes. Shading his smiles. The only time those shadows and shades disappear is when you've fucked him senseless, sweat and come streaking both your bodies. Then his smiles are nothing but joy, relief; his eyes showing love and hunger, need for you. For what you'll give him.

He rides you easily, body twisting, turning, moving so smoothly above yours that sometimes you lose yourself in watching him. Miles of sleek, tanned skin with muscles rippling beneath. You stroke all that skin, fingers touching, teasing, learning him. Flat nipples harden beneath your fingertips when you rub over them; hard little points begging for more. You pinch and pull on them until Sam writhes on you, then you pull and twist them some more.

His throat beckons, and you lean in, biting down and sucking heat to the surface, holding it until he whimpers for you. You do it again, and a third time, leaving bruises that bloom red-purple. Sam shudders when you press your fingertips into them, digging in to feel the heat, the life rushing just beneath the surface.

"Harder," he whispers, throat moving against your fingers.

You smile and stroke them lightly, watching as he narrows his eyes. He opens his mouth to say it again and you press harder, closing your fingers around his throat. Each stutter of breath in and out makes the skin ripple against your hands, palms pressing inward.

"Like that?" You ask, but you already know; see the answer in his eyes, wild and hot, desperate. Your cock throbs inside him, pounding in time with his pulse beneath your hands. Always in synch, but especially now, needing and wanting the same thing.

Sam coughs once, a broken-off sound, abortive attempt to swallow, and you squeeze a little tighter. He can still breathe, but he has to work for it, now. His hands on your chest mirror yours on his throat, and you know you'll have matching bruises come morning, in the shape of crescent moons, where his fingernails cut into your skin.

"Jerk yourself off," you tell him, caressing his pulse point with your thumbs. Carotid artery, you think, a pressure point to bring unconsciousness. "Stroke your dick for me, Sammy. Lemme see you come."

He shudders again, body moving sinuously, effortlessly as he works himself. You watch his face carefully, feel the way his muscle slowly tense, orgasm so, so close now. You're barely holding on, yourself, a hair's breadth away from driving up and up and up into his body until you spill hot and thick inside him.

He pants your name, trembling over you, and you squeeze harder, tighter, imagining the bruises he'll have in the morning. Sam whines, a high, needy sound, and clenches around your dick, body shaking as he comes, thick spatters of white striping his stomach and your chest. You squeeze again and watch his eyes roll back as he gives in, lets go, takes it all. He tightens around you again, shaking and quivering, and pleasure boils up inside you, searing you until nothing else exists but that moment.

You come back to yourself feeling utterly relaxed, completely spent. Sam's lax against you, on you, and you rub his throat gently, kissing him until he draws in a long, shaky breath and kisses you back.

"Gonna be sore tomorrow," you tell him, licking at his mouth, teasing with little nips and soothing laps of your tongue.

"Worth it," he says hoarsely, and lifts one of your hands up. He brings it up to his throat and you rest it there, fingers loosely fitted, lightly touching.

~fin~
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Date: 2008-09-02 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com
OMFG!!! Damn, woman! This is SCORCHING HOT. I'll admit to a bit of a kink for breathplay and this is so beautifully, vividly done. Love the use of 2nd person as well. It's so ... intimate.

Definitely saving this one for later reads!

Date: 2008-09-06 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for the feedback!

Date: 2008-09-02 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com
stunning stuff, honey. I cannot get enough of your doing this, the voice, the way we get under their skins with them, the way they are so intertwined.

burning fiery need.

guh.

*loves*

Date: 2008-09-06 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*snuggles you* Thanks, honey :) As always, your comments on my stuff makes my day. I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-09-02 05:31 am (UTC)
ext_4073: (shower!Dean)
From: [identity profile] cormallen.livejournal.com
You. I. YOU. I. *makes unintelligible happy noises*

As usual, you pack so much into a comparatively small piece. Sam's lax against you, on you, and you rub his throat gently, kissing him until he draws in a long, shaky breath and kisses you back. This is such a small thing, this gentle touch afterwards, but it's so telling. I really like your use of second person here - it feels intimate and "right there".

Have I mentioned really burning hot? Cause, GUH. Really burning HOT.

Date: 2008-09-06 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*snugs* Thank you :)

Sometimes, man, the story just... it comes to me in a voice, and that's the voice I have to use. I love 2nd person for kink, because it does make it seem like it's right there. I'm thrilled you thought so, too :) *hugs*

Date: 2008-09-02 05:37 am (UTC)
ext_17044: (Default)
From: [identity profile] linda3m.livejournal.com
Looks like your muse is back. The sex in this is hot and very powerful, but I just love the tenderness in the ending.

Date: 2008-09-06 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yeah, but man, my muse has rotten timing *g* I start the week out tired, and that sucks. But yay! I'm glad you liked the story :) Thank you :)

Date: 2008-09-02 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quiet000001.livejournal.com
muh.

amdead.

*ponders breathplay in au she is working on*

Date: 2008-09-06 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Breathplay is never a bad thing! *g* And thank you :)

Date: 2008-09-02 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tabularassa.livejournal.com
It is the new black, and OMG. You kill me. Seriously. I love how you know them so well, and therefore when you write them? Near perfection, in all their love. ♥

Date: 2008-09-06 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*snugs you* Thanks, honey :) I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-09-02 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nu-breed.livejournal.com
JESUS.

I would say your muse is back with BELLS ON, woman.

So fucking hot and intense, and yet so tender. NGUH.
Edited Date: 2008-09-02 07:18 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-09-06 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*smooch* Thanks, baby :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-09-02 10:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angstpuppy.livejournal.com
*whimper*
The trust and the tenderness, yis.
This:
Sam doesn't give in easily, even when it's something he wants, too. That so defines Sam.

Date: 2008-09-06 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yeah, I think Sam would fight any giving in -- but man, when he does. Whew! :)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

Date: 2008-09-02 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] memphis86.livejournal.com
OH MY. Um... Yeah it's the new black. That was reeeeally freaking good. I am very much awake now. Porn is the new coffee, it seems. :D

Date: 2008-09-14 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
"Fornicate instead of caffeinate!" *g* Okay, that was silly :) However, I'm glad you liked the story, and that it helped you wake up :)

Date: 2008-09-02 10:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldenplums.livejournal.com
*fans self* hoo wow.
i was not planning on reading this but the whole 'breathplay' caught my attention so I had to check it out. im glad i did. *gurgles*

Date: 2008-09-14 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
I'm glad you did, too :) Thanks for reading, and for leaving a comment :)

Date: 2008-09-02 12:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnemosime.livejournal.com
OMG this was so, so good! I don't think I have to words to leave a coherent comment, but I have to tell you this is amazing and SCORCHING hot. I have such a kink for breathplay, I can't find enough of it, and the way you've written this, it's just... I'm awed by it, really!

Also, I like a lot stories told in second person, and you did it so well, giving your writing a new level of intimacy and, to me, it's like they were surrounded by a thick atmosphere with just the two of them in, hot and yet lovely and caring.

Thank you so much for sharing :o)

Date: 2008-09-14 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! It was certainly coherent to me :)

I'm really glad you enjoyed the story so much, and that the 2nd person POV worked for you. I like it for stories like this because I do feel like it lends another level of intimacy. Thanks for that, in particular, because I know a lot of folks don't like 2nd person.

:)

Date: 2008-09-02 12:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mediaville.livejournal.com
Um. *is incoherent*


That was really good.

Generally I don't like second person POV - it never seems genuine enough to be believable. But you wrote Dean like a pro. It was easy to picture it all in my mind's eye, and man, it was burning hot.

Also, I loved this: He's been yours since the night he was put into your arms. You sold your soul for him; he gave it back to you.

Great job.

Date: 2008-09-14 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Not just for the comment, but for reading it, even though you don't generally care for the POV. I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

Date: 2008-09-02 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] denisitap.livejournal.com
*wordless*

Date: 2008-09-14 06:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2008-09-02 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] violetlemon47.livejournal.com
This was great - 2nd person can be so hard to pull off, but you totally did.

Date: 2008-09-14 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you! I love 2nd person, so I'm glad to hear it worked for you :)

Date: 2008-09-02 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phanie28.livejournal.com
Dear God, I'm awake now!! This was so HOT and you say your muse was gone? It's back hun, and it didn't let you down!!

DAMN!! :D

Date: 2008-09-14 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
The muse, it comes and goes :) I'm glad it worked for you, though *g* Better than an alarm clock, yeah? ;)

Date: 2008-09-02 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blueluthien.livejournal.com
This is perfection.

*sigh*

This is what their love is all about.

I actually got teary eyed.


Thank you for the emotion.

Date: 2008-09-14 06:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading, and for leaving the comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. To me, it's what their love is all about, too. It's not so much the kink, as the emotions behind it. Glad that came through :)

Date: 2008-09-02 02:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnute23.livejournal.com
OMG you did it again *thuds*

Date: 2008-09-14 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you :)

Date: 2008-09-02 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aynslee.livejournal.com
You found your muse! ;)

This was amazing. I love the way you write the boys!

Date: 2008-09-14 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Found my muse, misplaced it again, you know how it goes :)

Thanks, honey :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-09-02 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azraelz-angel.livejournal.com
Wow, that was hot, hot, hot. I didn't know that breathplay was one of my kinks, but apparently you and [livejournal.com profile] cormallen have shown me the light.

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story.

Date: 2008-09-14 06:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Isn't it funny how fandom introduces us to kinks we never knew we had? :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the comments :)

Date: 2008-09-02 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattoo-kink.livejournal.com
Breath!play !!!

*happily sigh*

So intimate and breathtaking. Great job!

Date: 2008-09-14 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-09-02 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boogirl13.livejournal.com
Holy - ! Uh, If anyone needs me I'll be in the bathroom.....

Date: 2008-09-14 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Hee! :) Thank you!

Date: 2008-09-02 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rejeneration.livejournal.com
So gorgeous, honey. Loving and intimate and so dammmmmnnnnn damn gorgeous. Nnnngggh.

Date: 2008-09-14 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thanks, Jen :) I'm really happy you enjoyed it :) *hugs*

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Date: 2008-09-02 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mini-moue.livejournal.com
... I'll be in my bunk... Scorchingly hot but also achingly tender. Perfect.

Date: 2008-09-14 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-09-02 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladymadness.livejournal.com
THAT was absolutely PERFECT!!!!!

Date: 2008-09-14 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

Date: 2008-09-02 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eboniorchid.livejournal.com
Unnnnggghhh! This has such quick intensity to it. Bravo with all the hot, yo!

Date: 2008-09-14 07:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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