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Title: Rimshot
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: They're not mine. They'd have a lot more fun if they were.
A/N: Here, have some porn. I found this wouldn't leave my brain (and thus, allow me to go to sleep) until I got back up out of bed and wrote it out. Pure PWP. Dean loves tasting Sam.






They trade kisses, tongues teasing, tracing, licking into one another's mouth. Testing the softness of gums, the insides of cheeks, the slickness of hard enamel. Long, wet kisses; making out until their lips are swollen, wet, sore.

Sam groans when Dean bites at his lower lip, licking over it to ease the sting. Dean dips lower, mouths along Sam's jaw, lips dragging over the rough stubble there. He bites at Sam's throat; sucks heat to the surface over and over again, until Sam's gasping, his throat and neck throbbing with a half-dozen hot bruises that beg to be touched, poked, prodded.

Dean presses his fingertips to the bruises, increases the pressure until Sam keens high in his throat and shudders. No words, just breathy, desperate sounds that make Dean growl in answer.

"Roll over," Dean mutters, tongue tracing the bruises one last time. Sam rolls slowly, spreading his knees when Dean smacks his ass. He love-hates this position, the way he feels dirty, like he's on display, but so turned on his stomach aches with it.

Hot, moist breath touches his neck; Sam shivers when goose bumps rise up everywhere Dean breathes on him. Kisses, nips, a scrape of teeth here and there as Dean works his way down Sam's back, fingers pressing along Sam's spine, fingernails leaving quick bits of pain that flare brighthot when a ragged edge catches, drags, releases.

"So fuckin' hot, Sammy." The words are a rough whisper, ghosting over Sam's skin. Heat washes through him, makes him flush. Makes him hard, eager, wanting. He bites his lip when Dean smoothes his hands over his ass; hisses when Dean cups him and spreads him open. "Love how much you want this," Dean says, nuzzling at the dip of Sam's back. Sam holds his breath, waits, body trembling with anticipation, dread, need.

Dean licks downward slowly, so slow it's like torture, and Sam hears the noise he makes when slick heat swirls over sensitive skin. He clenches automatically, forces himself to relax when Dean licks again, little kitten licks that tease.

"Pretty little hole." Another whisper, the words sliding into Sam, blending with the heat zig-zagging through him. Dean laps at him, presses his tongue against Sam's hole and flattens it, dragging it back and forth until Sam's breath is hitching, ragged and uneven.

He's moving with Dean, pushing back toward him, begging with his body. Dean licks into him, tongue-tip opening him, sliding inward. In, out, in, out, a little further each time, and Sam's slick with spit and pre-come, his thighs wet like he's a girl, and his belly sticky where his dick slaps against it, jerking with each touch of Dean's tongue.

"Please, Dean, God," he manages, finally, the words stuttering on his tongue before he gets them out.

"Nuh-uh. Just like this." Dean holds him open with his thumbs, tongues as deep into Sam as he can manage, and God, it's so good Sam's brain is shorting out. Slick, hot, and Dean flutters his tongue just a little; pulls back and licks at the rim, swirling his tongue over and around until Sam's dizzy with want. "Come on, Sammy. Want you to come for me, lemme see how much you like this."

He licks again and again, tonguing Sam like he's fucking him, thumbs pulling Sam wide. Sam comes with a sharp, hoarse cry, the heat in his belly spreading, growing, consuming him. It feels like electricity sizzling through him, burning along every nerve ending, until all he knows is hot, thick pleasure. He comes without touching his dick, just Dean's mouth and tongue working over him, into him, owning him.
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Date: 2008-03-19 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pyroblaze18.livejournal.com
O.O
-.-
O.O
-.-
O.O

Although I'm sorry you were having trouble sleeping, I am so not sorry for the porn.

Date: 2008-03-19 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acostilow.livejournal.com
What she said.

My brain's not functioning well enough to say it on my own.

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Date: 2008-03-19 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fpvs.livejournal.com
MMMm...Rimming. Gotta love that kink.

And Sam's humiliation/adoration of being licked like that feels SO right. And somehow Dean's physical marks left on Sam's body feels so much like possessive love :)

Date: 2008-03-23 09:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Rimming is a most wonderful kink, yes :)

Glad it all worked for you :) Usually I see Sam as the one more likely to go in for 'dirty' or 'kinky', but I liked this as a change :)

Thanks for the comments!

Date: 2008-03-19 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] micmezle.livejournal.com
Sweet Jesus

Date: 2008-03-23 09:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you! And dude, I love your icon :)

Date: 2008-03-19 04:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicenicegirl.livejournal.com
nggh! i think i need to go take a very cold shower now!! GOD that was hott!! GREAT job!

Date: 2008-03-23 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you! Um, enjoy the cold water? *g*

Date: 2008-03-19 04:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlmostlikely.livejournal.com
Mmmmm, YEAH BABY!! That's exactly the porny pick me up I needed this afternoon.

<3

Date: 2008-03-23 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
YAY! Always happy to pick someone up. Er, you know what I mean :) *snugs*

Date: 2008-03-19 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archylou.livejournal.com
oh dear god! Just what i needed to get me thru the last part of work (and into a cold shower)!

Date: 2008-03-23 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yay for helping you through the rest of the workday! :) Glad you enjoyed the story. I appreciate the comment :)

Date: 2008-03-19 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smilesoftnsweet.livejournal.com
O_O

I think my brain just fizzled out.

*thud*

Date: 2008-03-23 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yay! Brain-fizzle! *g*

Date: 2008-03-19 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com
Wow, hot like a supernova. I love Dean making him come with fingers and tongue.

Date: 2008-03-23 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Man, the *hottest* visual is one of the guys getting the other off without actually touching his dick. And this? Rimming is just hot anyway, so, guuuuuh. Yes.

Glad you enjoyed the story :)

Date: 2008-03-19 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bouncywild.livejournal.com
Now I've read this, I have to try and sleep. That just might not be possible! *fans self* ♥

Date: 2008-03-23 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Hah. Once I wrote it out, I was able to sleep *g* Thought transference! ;)

At least you hopefully had good dreams... :)

Date: 2008-03-19 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowc44.livejournal.com
Very hot! They seem so very in character here, too, though sadly, I'm sure we'll never see anything remotely like this on the show. Reason #583 this series needs to be on Showtime or HBO.

Date: 2008-03-23 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Oh, god. Could you just imagine? Supernatural meets Queer As Folk. *dies*

Seriously, could you imagine? GUH.

Glad you liked it! Thanks :)

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Date: 2008-03-19 05:42 am (UTC)
pie_andcoffee: (dean beautiful lips)
From: [personal profile] pie_andcoffee
mmmmm... sleep, baby, sleep, you totally earned it. this was delicious, hot, wet, and nnnnggh...

Date: 2008-03-23 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-03-19 06:56 am (UTC)
ext_4073: (incoherent buffy)
From: [identity profile] cormallen.livejournal.com
*whimpers*
Pleasant dreams, woman! You've earned them!

Date: 2008-03-23 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
I'll bet my dreams weren't as pleasant as Sam and Dean's... *g*

Thanks, honey :) *hugs*

Date: 2008-03-19 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattoo-kink.livejournal.com
*makes incoherent noises*

Well... Shit! I've forgotten to mention this kink at the icon.

Rimming. *YAY*

*mems*

Date: 2008-03-23 09:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Rimming is so *totally* YAY, yes :) Glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks for commenting *g*

Date: 2008-03-19 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tabularassa.livejournal.com
ohmylordofgrace.

Something just throbbed in my panties...

Date: 2008-03-23 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*snickers* Gosh, wonder what that might've been? Just imagine how Sam was throbbing? And after all that, you KNOW Dean pulled him closer, slicked his dick up, and thrust into Sam in one, fluid movement. Sam would be wet and open, all relaxed from coming, and Dean could fuck into him hard and fast, wet heat surrounding him...

Hmm. I think that throbbing is contagious ;)

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Date: 2008-03-19 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quiet000001.livejournal.com
I have a fic pending (j2) in which Jared ends up in quite a similar position.

Clearly, he'd just look Damn Good like that. ;)

Date: 2008-03-23 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yes, he would *g* And dammit, don't tease! Where's the fic?!

Date: 2008-03-19 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] insaneboingo.livejournal.com
Geezus, woman. This is.. wow.

Alright, so I'm way sorry that you couldn't sleep. But geezus. This is frickin' hot.

Wow.

Date: 2008-03-23 09:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Always glad when someone can benefit from me not sleeping *g* Glad you enjoyed the story--thanks for letting me know :)

Date: 2008-03-19 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lima-sierra.livejournal.com
*scoops brain off floor*

GOD DAMN YES. Meeep! Hot like the SUN. Guh.

Date: 2008-03-27 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you! :) And, uh, sorry about the melted brain? :)

Date: 2008-03-19 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zelda-zee.livejournal.com
GUH. Gorgeous, filthy, hot! Just what I needed.

Date: 2008-03-27 01:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you! And god, I love your icon. Speaking of guh!

Date: 2008-03-19 09:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] readerj.livejournal.com
I just love the way you write the boys. Needy, hot and intimate.

Date: 2008-03-27 01:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! It's the intimacy that kills me. They're just... it's so THERE, y'know? On screen. *happy sigh*

Glad you liked the story :)

Date: 2008-03-19 09:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fleshflutter.livejournal.com
Oh now that is gorgeous. So very very hot. :)

Date: 2008-03-27 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thanks, darlin' :) *snugs you* Glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-03-19 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyndrarae.livejournal.com
Wow... *pants* I have no words just... wow.

Date: 2008-03-27 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Those words work just fine :) Thank you!

Date: 2008-03-19 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] agt-spooky.livejournal.com
Holy CRAP, woman! Now that was one DAMN hot way to start off my morning. :-)

Date: 2008-03-27 01:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yay! :) And I aim to please. Or something ;)

Date: 2008-03-19 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shotofjack.livejournal.com
Wow.
Wonderfully written.

Thanks!

Date: 2008-03-27 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 2008-03-19 11:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xcaileadairx.livejournal.com
Ngh! That was delicious.

Date: 2008-03-27 02:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-03-19 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fromyourashes.livejournal.com
Holy Mary, mother of pearl, oh. Oh, thank you.

Date: 2008-03-27 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed it :)
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