mickeym: (da_hotshot)
[personal profile] mickeym
Title: And Then There Was One
Pairing: Logan/Alec/Max
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~750
Spoilers/Warnings: None I can think of.
Disclaimer: So not mine, sadly.
A/N: I fully blame [livejournal.com profile] rivers_bend and [livejournal.com profile] montana_harper for this. They're enablers, pure and simple. Also, this turned out to be far more…melancholy, I guess, than I'd intended. Is porn-without-angst too much to ask for? Apparently. Anyway, hope y'all enjoy :)






They never actually ask you. Max isn't quite able to leave herself that open, or vulnerable; Logan teeters on the edge of saying the words, but unable to get past the brutal awkwardness.

So, no asking. Which means you offer.

No, I don't mind. Anything to help out a couple friends. Really, it's okay.

You're not really being altruistic. Max is one seriously fine chick, and Logan isn't exactly hard on the eyes. You like sex, and you like both of them, and everyone ends up a winner, right?

Except--not.

Because the way Max writhes beneath you, when you push her thighs up and open so you can eat her out, it's not for you. Not really. It's you between her thighs, drowning in heat and wet; spit and come smeared over your face and her taste heavy on your tongue, but it's his name she cries out when you work your tongue over her clit, and into her; when she arches her back and comes and comes and comes.

Logan bites the back of your neck, teeth skimming over your barcode, his breathing rough and heavy in your ear and against your skin. Gooseflesh erupts everywhere he touches, everywhere the words land, moist and wanting and hurting.

Kiss her for me. Let her taste herself…

Max kisses like she fucks, sharp and quick with lots of nips. If she had claws instead of fingernails, and fangs instead of teeth, your skin would be shredded. But she laps at your face: chin, cheeks, mouth, smearing her juices. Behind you, against you, Logan shudders and whines low in his throat.

You slide into her, sheathing yourself in wet heat that feels like a dream. Logan gives you a minute, just a minute, then presses against you. Into you. Stretching muscle and tissue, filling you. You groan, shudder out a breath and try to relax; beneath you Max gasps as each press forward from Logan pushes you deeper inside her.

You want to kiss Logan, too, but kissing him is how this starts, not how it finishes. Instead you tilt your head back, shivering when he mouths at the cords of your neck; when he laps at the beads of sweat gathering along your hairline. You lean forward to mirror his actions on Max; she tastes salty-sweet, musky and earthy and so alive.

Need to fuck you…fuck her. Need to move, Alec.

Each word is a grunt; not quite pain, more than pleasure. You hear them, feel them, each one rumbling down through you. Logan fucks like there won't be another time; single-minded, intense, this is his sole focus right now. Every stroke into you hurts but doesn't, sensation blossoming from too much to not enough and God, you want more. Want it all.

Max stares up at you, through you, past you; all you want is one look at you. You want her eyes on yours, just for a minute. You want Logan's mouth against you whispering your name. Just once.

You come when Max tightens around you, spasms of white-hot pleasure catching you, holding you, owning you. Logan cries out, a sound somewhere between a growl and a sob, and Max wriggles beneath you as Logan drives hard and fast into the both of you.

He tenses up just before coming, and you hold your breath with each pulse inside you; that little bit of liquid heat something you get that you don't have to -- can't -- share. For one brief, selfish moment, you're glad.

The three of you are frozen for a moment, hunger briefly appeased but not sated. Behind you, in front of you, the weight of their stares drags at you. You heard the whispered words called out in the throes of orgasm: Max, God, Max and …Logan….

Max moves first, shoving at you, at Logan, muttering, can't breathe, get off.

It hurts when Logan pulls out, moves away. Not so much a physical pain, though there is the sting of that, but a disconnect you feel bone deep.

She's gone almost instantly, one hesitant caress -- leather gloves always in place -- to Logan's cheek and only the barest of glances at you before she scrambles up off the mattress and dashes into the bathroom. Logan moves a little slower, gives you a look you've never been able to decipher, but in the end he goes, too, and you're left alone.

After all, everyone got what they wanted, right?

~fin~

Date: 2008-02-20 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twelve-pastels.livejournal.com
Okay, GUH and ARGH and OH ALEC. Come here and let Mama make you feel all better.

hem.

Very good. And now I have a hankering for, like, an extended version of this that somehow ends up with them as a real threesome, oh, god, I don't know how.

Yum.

Date: 2008-03-02 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yeah, I don't know how they'd ever end up as a real threesome; as much as I love the idea, I'm not sure they could ever all get past the past. Too much, y'know?

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, though :) Thanks for the comments :)

Date: 2008-02-20 04:35 am (UTC)
ext_4073: (shiny)
From: [identity profile] cormallen.livejournal.com
Oh, Alec... Hot plus angsty is a complete win in my book.

(also, that's a shiny Alec icon *covets*)

Date: 2008-03-02 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Just enough angst to make it palatable, yeah? *g*

Alec just...hurts so pretty, doesn't he? :)

Date: 2008-02-20 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] candycentric.livejournal.com
Loved it! And hey, whoever thought I'd enjoy M/L again?! Not me! So good job! ;)
Edited Date: 2008-02-20 04:36 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-03-02 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you :) Probably the dash of Alec. A dash of Alec makes everything better ;)

Glad you enjoyed the story--thanks for the comments :)

Date: 2008-02-20 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nevcolleil.livejournal.com
Gah - what an awesome little fic. You make me feel how horrible Alec feels at the end of this and it makes me hate Max and Logan for him. Wow. Great job!

Date: 2008-03-02 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Well, don't hate them too much--Alec knows going into it, y'know? I think the boy's a bit of a masochist, truthfully.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, though :) Also, your icon? Very cool :)

Date: 2008-02-20 04:50 am (UTC)
poisontaster: (Flails)
From: [personal profile] poisontaster
This hurts me in the exact way that Alec himself does. *wibble* So good. You always give such good fic. :D

Date: 2008-03-02 10:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Mwah :) I'm glad you liked it, honey. I just got to thinking about the three of them, and their odd little connections, and how none of them can really have each other without a lot of pain and angst...and ended up here. *g*

*snugs you*

Date: 2008-02-20 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pyroblaze18.livejournal.com
This is so perfectly Alec. It hurt, but really, it's impossible to have the three of them together without someone getting hurt, isn't it?

*hugs* It's absolutely amazing.
Edited Date: 2008-02-20 06:32 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-03-02 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
but really, it's impossible to have the three of them together without someone getting hurt, isn't it?

I really think it is, yeah. There are such odd dynamics at play between all three of them, and no one's willing -- or able -- to let go completely, so we end up with this.

Thanks for the comments :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-02-20 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rivers-bend.livejournal.com
oh yes. This exact thing. *nods*

I told you you wanted to write this.

*smooches you*

Date: 2008-03-02 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*laughs* I think we need to address the part now where clearly I'm your bitch to order around to write what you want ;)

*smooches you back* Glad you liked it, honey :)

Date: 2008-02-20 07:39 am (UTC)
montanaharper: dean punching the air with the text F T W (ftw)
From: [personal profile] montanaharper
Heh. I love being an enabler. *g*

Date: 2008-03-02 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yeah, yeah, yeah, WHATEVER. :P

:)

Date: 2008-02-20 10:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aelfsiden.livejournal.com
Poor Alec. This was lovely and hot. Thanks for sharing. :)

Date: 2008-03-02 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 2008-02-20 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] memphis86.livejournal.com
Oh my GOD.

This was really really good! And so hot! And I think I just woke up in reading it. Great concept, and lovely execution. And did I mention crazyhot porn? Because OH MY GOD. So good! And, n'awwwwww, Alec!! I want to smish him so.

Date: 2008-03-02 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you :) Glad you liked it :)

And yeah, I want to smish him, too. He needs someone to love him. A lot. Which is why, at some point, I will probably end up writing some epic schmoopfest that's either Sam/Alec (though that would hurt, too, because unless Dean's with them, it means Dean's dead :( ) or Alec/Gem, because I kinda love Gem a little bit already. She went through labor and childbirth in near silence, and yeah. Anyway *g*

Date: 2008-02-20 02:04 pm (UTC)
ext_1843: (papajohn)
From: [identity profile] cereta.livejournal.com
Oh, ouch. Lovely, but ouch.

Date: 2008-03-02 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Some characters just really bring out the ouch!factor. Alec would be one of those *g*

Date: 2008-02-22 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yourlivewire.livejournal.com
so, i've been wanting to read max/logan/alec for...oh, i don't know, EVER. so when i saw this, i clicked immediately. it did not disappoint, it was hot and angsty and AMAZING and did i mention hot?

i love that max isn't looking at alec and doesn't touch him or thank him before leaving, i love how logan DOES look at him before leaving, i love how alec is saying both of their names and neither of them are saying his.

amazing. absolutely amazing.

Date: 2008-03-02 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Thanks for the lovely comments! I'm glad the story worked for you :) It is a bit ouchy for Alec (er. Like the Grand Canyon is a bit of a hole in the ground...), but I don't see, with this threesome, that it really could be any other way.

Thanks again :)
(deleted comment)

Re: so hot it sears past skin

Date: 2008-03-02 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Yep :( He needs someone to love him for HIM.

Thanks for commenting :)

Date: 2008-04-23 11:12 pm (UTC)
ext_841: (conduit (by makesmewannadie))
From: [identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com
So...you may remember that we share a few of our favorite kinks, don't you?

And here is yet another one...bc omg!!! I badly badly want Max/Alec/Logan conduit fic! And the fact that *you* have written it makes it all the better....

pets poor alec, but that's how it'd have to be!!!

Date: 2008-04-24 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Oh, I remember. *eg* Mmmm. Maybe I should have Logan fisting Alec. *koff*

But! I'm glad you liked this :) And I'm so glad to hear from you again! There's some good stuff out there, you just *really* have to dig for it. I've been compiling links here; you're welcome to have a go at 'em. Oh, and I have a bunch in my memories, too.

Do you read Supernatural? Or more specifically, do you read Wincest? 'Cos there's also some really good xovers...I'm very partial to Sam/Alec, or Sam/Dean/Alec. :D Oh, and [livejournal.com profile] poisontaster has some really terrific Joshua/Alec, if you're of a mind to branch out.

Date: 2008-04-24 12:27 am (UTC)
ext_841: (johnandrodney (by monanotlisa))
From: [identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com
You just made me blush here :) Bc now I'm looking at Sam's hands and...wait...you've already gone there with a fic I never feedbacked you on (which also answers the question of whether I read Wincest :)

I read SPN fairly selectively, usually from recs, the longer stuff, and folks I know. It's hard to be on top of things in a fandom that big, and my first love (Dark Angel craziness notwithstanding is still with my favorite astrophysicist...)

I read poisontaster's Max/Alec (which Alec/Joshua in the background) but can't quite go there otherwise...gimme a couple more days :) And yes, I've read some marvelous crossovers in the last few days but am excited to go through your lists (bc I'm planning to do a long rec post with some stuff that I might otherwise not rec, but DA is mostly a not so impressive place...the great fic is few and far between and I can handle a lot of typos and stuff id there's good plot happening...though the character bashing??? WTF!!!)

*hugs you*

Date: 2008-04-24 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*laughs* Yep, I went there with Sam's hands. *shivers happily* God. Um. Okay, moving along! :)

It is hard to stay on top of stuff in SPN. If you don't have [livejournal.com profile] crack_impala friended, you should. That's a good rec comm. I have a lot of stuff memmed for spn, too (working on getting links transfered to my Del.icio.us thingy). The nice thing I've noticed about SPN is there is a lot of longer fics--regularly. (And Big Bang coming soon! So I should get back to writing. Oi.)

There is a LOT of character bashing in DA fic, unfortunately. Oh! There's one Alec/Ames mpreg...that is just freakin' FANTASTIC. It was actually what dragged me (kicking and screaming all the way, thanks) into DA as a fandom. If you're interested, I'll get you the link, or again, it's in my memories. "Chimera" is the title.

*hugs you back*

Must go write. Only eight days 'til my draft is due for big bang. ARRRRGH!

Date: 2008-04-24 12:52 am (UTC)
ext_841: (byrne)
From: [identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com
already got that one...i can't believe there are two apparently good alec/ames stories....

and yes, the number of longer stories is great about SPN...i read through most of last year's big bang and am looking fwd to this year's.

though i've gotta say, i kinda like alec bottoming even better than dean...i'm getting serious alex!vibes here...it's like alec is what XF fandom was only dreaming of!!!! you can't tell me that boy can't take...and take and take :P

Date: 2008-04-24 01:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
Alec is SUCH a bottom. Even when he's fucking Max, he's not the one in charge. I've read a couple stories around where he's topping, and it's just. It's WRONG. Heh. I'm maybe a little...um. Set in my ways, for that one. Wouldn't he be pretty as the filling in a Sam/Dean sandwich, though? And oh, how 'bout double penetration?

It's getting warm in here. *g*

Date: 2008-04-24 01:04 am (UTC)
ext_841: (dean (by lim))
From: [identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com
well..you know *i'm* not the writer between the two of us...but i'll be there on the sidelines cheering you on EVERY STEP OF THE WAY!!! :)

and yes...i used to think that i like everyone in my pairing equally but i'm realizing that i tend to have favorites and i tend to prefer them to bottom (and they're the one most unlike me...bc if i were like any of them, it's be mulder or mckay or sam or logan....)

it's getting very hot!!!

Date: 2008-08-03 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com
DAMN! This is hot and bittersweet and wonderfully, perfectly written. Just ... I can't say anymore. Lovely job. :-)

Date: 2008-08-20 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mystik-ivanow.livejournal.com
Alec! *hugs him tightly* ;__;

Date: 2008-09-06 09:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pyrokitten77.livejournal.com
Aw, so sad! Poor Alec! *huggles him* This was great! Full of a nice, big heaping of ANGST. Makes everybody happy. Well, happy and sad. :D

Date: 2009-06-29 11:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magnifica7.livejournal.com
Oh, THE angst! Awesome! *must re-watch DA NOW*

Date: 2010-06-06 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tulaah.livejournal.com
my baby!

Profile

mickeym: (Default)
mickeym

January 2026

S M T W T F S
    123
45678 910
11121314151617
1819 2021222324
25262728293031

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jan. 27th, 2026 09:57 am
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios