1. They're 'friends' in one paragraph and in the next, referring in their heads to the other as 'lover'. When this is their first time doing anything.
2. Taught =/= taut. 'Taught' is when you're teaching someone. 'Taut' is pulled tight, stretched to the limit, no slack. THEY ARE NOT THE SAME.
3. 'The older/elder', 'the younger', 'the blond', 'the brunette'. No. Please. When in doubt just type out someone's name. That works. Really!
I should sleep. Headache/earache finally gone \o/ And there was much rejoicing. Or something.
Bedtime. Yes. G'night (moon). :)
2. Taught =/= taut. 'Taught' is when you're teaching someone. 'Taut' is pulled tight, stretched to the limit, no slack. THEY ARE NOT THE SAME.
3. 'The older/elder', 'the younger', 'the blond', 'the brunette'. No. Please. When in doubt just type out someone's name. That works. Really!
I should sleep. Headache/earache finally gone \o/ And there was much rejoicing. Or something.
Bedtime. Yes. G'night (moon). :)