need a bit of help

[mickeym]

I have a story I'm writing for my nieces, for their Christmas present. I'm hoping to be done with it soon. Is there anyone who would be able to read it over for me and tell me if it needs anything added or changed, or whatever? It's at about 1700 words right now; I figure it'll end up between 2500-3000 words.

This is aimed at little girls, almost-seven, and eight, so think princesses and magic and talking mice.

Thanks :)

Got it sorted, thank you :)

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[miafeliz.livejournal.com]

if you want another set of eyes to look at it, send it to me whenever you're ready. I'd love to read it-- even when it's done!

maria at cosmicink dot net.