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I posted this yesterday in [livejournal.com profile] adelate's LJ, in response to this, but thought I'd put it out here and share. Just a snippet, but what a pretty visual, half-nekid, damp baby!Lance...and Chris, ready to pounce... mmm :)

Oh, um. NC17ish *g*

And Ice? I haven't forgotten the bunny *g* Promise!



~~~~~~~~~~

Chris blinked when he got a good look at Lance, wet-suit rolled down to his waist, and completely bare above it, a bit of water glistening in stray droplets here and there. So much skin...so much bare skin... He blinked a couple of times before he realized Lance was talking to him.

"...go get something to eat, afterward?" Lance looked at him, eyebrow raised, and Chris shrugged helplessly, unable to look away from sun-kissed bare...*bare*...skin.

"Um. Sure?"

"You didn't hear a word I said, did you?"

"Um." He looked up in time to see Lance lick his lips. Oh, God. "Lance--"

"Hmm?"

"I--" A quick glance around showed they were alone. He stepped closer and rubbed his thumb across Lance's mouth. "Hungry, but not for food." Chris licked at Lance's neck, drew his tongue down the full length, nipping gently at the hollow of his throat. Lance shuddered against him, growling softly.

"Chris--"

"Shh." He licked again, across Lance's collarbone, tasting sweat, and sun, and lakewater. Warm, damp boy. His growl echoed the ones Lance was making. "So good," he whispered, licking back, dragging his teeth gently over soft skin. Lance shifted, raising his hands to grip Chris' arms. Chris smiled
then licked downward, running his tongue over one pale pink nipple, lapping at it as it beaded up against his tongue.

Lance held tighter and whimpered. Chris wondered if he would have bruises, but didn't really care. Lance could kiss them better, later. He suckled, then bit at Lance's nipple, then licked away the sting. A long lick across his chest to the other nipple, and it was already hard and tight, begging to
be suckled, licked, bitten. Chris was happy to oblige.

He dropped to his knees as he licked downward, smooth, warm skin prickling with sweatdrops he lapped up eagerly. Lance's navel was a shallow hollow he had to play in, and he smiled when Lance growled again, hips arching forward in the same rhythm his tongue moved to.

The wetsuit went down easily, in spite of Lance's hissed, "*Chris*, no--", and then the only sounds Lance made were soft grunts and low cries that increased when Chris took him into his mouth and sucked.

Lance gripped Chris' hair tightly and the pain was prickly, sharp, but good,and it was easy to lose himself in the moment, sun warm against his neck,Lance, musky and sweaty and hard in his mouth, cock stickysalty with precome, and so so good. He loved the way Lance fit so well in his mouth, in his throat, and the way he worked with Chris, pushing and pulling on Chris'
hair to hold his head. And then it was Lance pulsing hotly against his tongue, fingers gripping impossibly tight, thrusting forward, salty-bitterness spreading over his tongue as Lance came.

~fin~

Date: 2003-01-24 09:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patchworkdragon.livejournal.com
::whimpers::

::brain explodes::

damn, now I have to explain to IT that I need a new keyboard because my brain melted out and jammed the keys. That'll teach me to read porn at work.

Date: 2003-01-24 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
hee! um...sorry? :-) or maybe not really?

Seriously, tho'--thank you :) I'm glad you liked the story! Thanks for letting me know :)

Date: 2003-01-24 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thebeamiestface.livejournal.com
You killed me. God, yum.

Date: 2003-01-24 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
thanks, hon :) I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2003-01-24 09:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_bettina_/
Baby!Lance *swoon*. Trickyfish *yum*. More?

Date: 2003-01-24 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
It is a yummy visual, isnt it? :) I dunno about more right now...but eventually *g* Thanks, hon :)

Date: 2003-01-24 09:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamtrance.livejournal.com
holy shit woman. *fans self*

wonderful.

Date: 2003-01-24 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*hugs* Thank you, hon :) Glad you liked it!

Date: 2003-01-24 10:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nsyncbelle.livejournal.com
Oh hell, that was hot.

Date: 2003-01-24 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*grins* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 2003-01-24 11:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icebun.livejournal.com
And Ice? I haven't forgotten the bunny *g* Promise!

Eeeeeeeeeee!!!!! You know how excited I am about *that*! :)

Date: 2003-01-24 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
I know you're excited *g* It may end up being tomorrow, now, 'cos -- got a bunny for one of the GARs! eeeeeee! have to go with it. First kiss, baby!

Re:

Date: 2003-01-25 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icebun.livejournal.com
I know you're excited *g* It may end up being tomorrow, now, 'cos -- got a bunny for one of the GARs! eeeeeee! have to go with it. First kiss, baby!

Well, tomorrow is good too, especially for such a good cause... GAR! First kiss! Eeeeee!

Date: 2003-01-24 01:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suzw71.livejournal.com
Kim, Sweetie -

You just made my whole body explode! I'm sitting here completely dead, staring at the monitor, whimpering "more, please, more".

You really need to write more TrickyFish, especially Baby TF cause you do it so very well!

Date: 2003-01-24 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com
*hurries to clean up the mess of puddled-Suz* *g*

Erm. Sorry about the mess? :) Or not, y'know. But--I'm glad you liked the story, hon. And you know me, it's there, just waiting to be coaxed out. *cough*trickcotp*cough*

Date: 2003-01-24 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] ex_halo669
baby!TF blowjobbery. oh yes indeedy. wonderful as always, hon :)

and i assume that JC was watching and wanking, right? right.

Date: 2003-01-24 09:19 pm (UTC)
ext_90: crop of 'The Morning Star' by Alphonse Mucha; woman in flowing gown with hand to forehead, painted in greens and golds (pornstar)
From: [identity profile] gblvr.livejournal.com
::slurp:: THAT was a lovely bit of smut.... Thank you, kindly.

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