Since the story in question is a story written by me, I really would love to hear these sort of comments on my own journal, as opposed to the journal of someone who was kind enough to rec me. My beta and I both scoured my fic for inconsistencies; it is possible that we may have missed something. I would appreciate it if you pointed out where in the story you saw inconsistencies such as the one you refer to above.
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Date: 2007-12-31 11:51 pm (UTC)