Why on earth are you posting all of this to someone who recced the story? mickeym liked the story and thought others might enjoy it, too. She had nothing to do with the writing of it, so if you have an issue with the writing, you should address the author. Your "honest critique" is fine, if it's made in response to the proper person. Here? It looks a little snotty and rude.
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Date: 2007-12-31 10:14 pm (UTC)