Hey! Thanks for the feedback :) I changed it in the version I posted to my website -- it's been a LONG time since my son was that little, and I appreciate the refresher :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your taking the time to comment (and point the sound/name thing out) Thanks again :)
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Re: very nice
Date: 2007-05-06 11:49 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your taking the time to comment (and point the sound/name thing out) Thanks again :)