at first I thought this was a joke, but sadly, it isn't

Colombian Bishop Worries That Gay Dad Could Develop Sexual Attraction To His Two Adopted Boys

When asked about Mr Burr’s suitability as a father the bishop said, “I do not know him and I am not accusing him of anything, but one thing is clear and that is that he has homosexual tendencies and he is going to receive a boy of 10-years-old and an adolescent of 13, and between them there won’t be a father-son relationship.” He continued, “He will receive two children at an age when they may be attractive to him, which could be a temptation“.


To balance the crazy a little, though, is this fantastic article about a supportive family with a transgender child: Jonas and Wyatt Maines were born identical twins, but from the start each had a distinct personality. The twin boys were identical in every way but one. Wyatt was a girl to the core, and now lives as one, with the help of a brave, loving family and a path-breaking doctor’s care. Check the first page for a picture of the now-14-year-old twins, Jonas and Nicole.

need a bit of help

I have a story I'm writing for my nieces, for their Christmas present. I'm hoping to be done with it soon. Is there anyone who would be able to read it over for me and tell me if it needs anything added or changed, or whatever? It's at about 1700 words right now; I figure it'll end up between 2500-3000 words.

This is aimed at little girls, almost-seven, and eight, so think princesses and magic and talking mice.

Thanks :)

Got it sorted, thank you :)