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mickeym ([personal profile] mickeym) wrote2003-05-13 08:16 pm
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drabbling...

Still trying to kick-start the brain.

halo: three words: exist, arch and breathe. drabble. get the words coming.
kim: oh... i dunno if i can do a drabble that way. i can try.
kim: you too, same words.
halo: okay :-)

Death warning. If that's a problem, please don't read it.



You don't exist any more. You're nothing more than thoughts, memories; flashes of pain, laughter, tears and joy rolled into mental pictures. You remember being there, being held, touched with reverence, with love. You remember his fingertips tracing your face.

You remember the pain etched into his features, saw his tears hit skin that couldn't feel any longer.

"Breathe, Chris, c'mon, please—" Frantic whisper.

You watched abstractly as the rain mingled with your blood, muting the color. Erasing you.

You watched your back arch when they zapped you, trying to restart your heart.

You hope he believes in ghosts.

[identity profile] clumsygyrl.livejournal.com 2003-05-13 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm a lurker. i'm a lurker.

but wow. that was so beautiful. wonderful job. i had no idea how much you could say with a drabble... i'm astounded.

[identity profile] mickeym.livejournal.com 2003-05-13 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams* Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it--and took the time to let me know!

Re:

[identity profile] clumsygyrl.livejournal.com 2003-05-13 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome! =)

Always time to praise good TrickC. hehe