mickeym: (spn_throes of passion)
mickeym ([personal profile] mickeym) wrote2011-06-08 11:25 am

A Delicious Torment, 1/1, NC-17, Jared/Jensen (RPS)

Title: A Delicious Torment
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~1000
Disclaimer: They're not mine, I don't know them, and this isn't real.
Warnings: elements of BDSM; urethral sounding play
Summary: It's all one huge ache that has you breathless and aroused, chest rising and falling with the effort of getting more oxygen when all you want to do is just feel.
A/N: Um. Porn makes everything better? I dunno, I was doing some research for something else, and ended up with this. Story of my life. Many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] raynedanser, as always, for encouragement. Hope y'all enjoy :)





Pleasure. Hot and thick, whiskey-laced honey trickling slowly over every inch of your body with each kiss from his lips; with each touch of his fingers.

Pain. Bright and electric, sizzling and zipping over nerves laid bare and raw. You feel each and every spot where the leather hit, stripes like fire kissing you.

They blend together until you're not sure which one is which any more. It's all one huge ache that has you breathless and aroused, chest rising and falling with the effort of getting more oxygen when all you want to do is just feel. Nothing more. Just feel.

"Look at you, so gorgeous like this."

Words that ghost over your skin, raising goosebumps in their wake. He follows them with a brush of his lips, the tip of his tongue.

"Dripping for me. So wet. So ready." Fingernails tease at the edge of your slit, biting, catching, holding. He pokes, pulls, and you feel the drops of pre-come welling up and trickling down, slicking up your skin. "You ready, Jen? Want what's coming next?"

"Yes, God, please—" You hiss when he scratches at tender skin, when the ragged edge of a fingernail catches again, pulling your slit wider. It burns, a kiss of heat shivering through you, and you arch upward into it, wanting it, wanting more. "Jared. Jared, please."

"Yeah. Gonna do it. God, I love you like this." He rubs again, fingertips this time, no nails, smearing sticky-slick pre-come around. He strokes downward over your shaft, barely touching you, fingertips just grazing over the vein throbbing in your dick, a roadmap of need. He cups and rolls your balls with one hand and jacks you gently with the other, until you're sure you can't get any harder.

The sharp scent of antiseptic stings your nose, and there's the music of metal clinking against metal, and then against glass. You shiver in anticipation, fingers flexing against the bonds holding you down.

He teases you with the slender length of metal, circling it around your slit until every breath coming from you is half-gasp, half-sob. The sound is cool, almost cold with the lube Jared spread over it, and it stretches you so good. It burns, the further in he slides it, and it's so slow, agonizingly slow, and just perfect. You're sobbing with it, as Jared works the sound in and out, steady and measured, driving you out of your mind.

You rock upward, tiny thrusts to push the sound deeper. Jared smacks the inside of your thigh, but he moves it a little faster, laughing low and throaty when you whine, "…please, more. More."

The words end in a hiss when the sound slides out, and you cry out when Jared rubs the next one – bigger, thicker, wider – over the swollen head of your dick before setting it to the tiny slit. You shiver in anticipation, the shivers increasing, rippling through you when your body gives in, allows it entrance.

The sting widens, deepens, becomes a burn as gravity does its thing and pulls the sound deeper down inside you. Jared watches you, eyes dark and hungry as you shake. It hurts, you hurt everywhere, but it feels so fucking good, too, and even better when Jared fucks your dick gently, the sound moving within you, opening you and stretching you, so good you want to scream with it.

Fingers nudge backward behind your balls, rubbing, stroking, slick and warm when they're pressed into you; a contrast to the cool metal sliding in and out. You don't know whether to push down to meet the fingers, or upward to get the sound deeper, and your head is spinning with the pleasure.

"Love to watch you like this," Jared mutters. "All hot for it, cock throbbing, ass clenching around my fingers. Wanna fuck you, Jen. Split you open on my dick and ride you 'til I come deep inside you."

"Jesus—Jared—" You want that, too. All of it, all the time, until there's nothing left of you but the pleasure.

It's rushing through you now, heat that's growing, expanding, building up—

"Gonna come for me, Jen?

"Y-yeah, oh, God, please, need to—"

Jared wiggles the sound, pulling it up and letting it slide back in, faster than before, and you're dizzy with how good it feels, you ache with it, can't get it fast enough, hard enough, enoughenoughenoughenough--

Coming straddles that fine line between pleasure and pain. It feels like wildfire licking through you, searing you. Jared's fingers move inside you, rubbing and pressing on your prostate until you're ready to scream with the pleasure. You shout when Jared pulls the sound out, thick pulses of come following it, your entire body throbbing with each one. Jared rubs harder, fingers stroking, working you. Pressing on that one spot over and over until you feel like he's milked every drop of energy, every drop of come, out of you.

You're boneless when he moves up over you, sliding inside you with one long, powerful stroke. You coast on the powerful waves still buffeting you, endorphins slip-sliding through your system. Jared fucks you the way he kisses you: sweet and tender, strong and hard, taking and giving all at once. You cling to him, move with him, groaning when he strokes you hard again, wringing one last, dry orgasm from you as he comes inside you, thick, slick heat filling you.

Afterward, later, he cradles you in his arms, your body spooned to his and calming as his calms. You ache, but it's a good ache, and you close your eyes to focus on it, the steady thrum throughout as you slide toward sleep.

Last thing you're aware of before sleep takes you is Jared's lips, curled up into a smile, brushing a kiss against your neck.

~fin~

[identity profile] dont-hate-me01.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Warning! I'm about to self combust at any second, please stand clear. This was just too hot to read!! Excellent.
embroiderama: (Jensen - laying down)

[personal profile] embroiderama 2011-06-08 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, that's just--guh! Sensuous and beautiful.

[identity profile] angelhorny.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow wow wow!!

*fan herself*

[identity profile] ava-bell-yan.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow!

That was phenomenal. Your detail was just simply spectacular and it was hot.

[identity profile] cyn-chronicity.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
HOLY SHIT I got nothing else right now. You liquified my brain hon ;)
ext_19515: by: art_in_disguise (WRAPPED UP)

[identity profile] faunaana.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, thank YOU for this. This is delicious
ext_35214: (wincest)

[identity profile] munibunny.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Geez! *fans self*

[identity profile] raynedanser.livejournal.com 2011-06-08 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
As always, you are so so welcome, love. *smooches*

[identity profile] vodou-blue.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
Guh! *thud*

Brilliant!

[identity profile] runedgirl.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
GUH :)

[identity profile] deansgirl7107.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
Fuck!!!

Holy shit!!!!

More...

[identity profile] beatlemaniac9.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
Gosh, there aren't enough sounding fics out there. And this one was really hot! You just made my night!

*mems*
heard_the_owl: made by lj user mediocrechick (Supernatural - Dean is too pretty)

[personal profile] heard_the_owl 2011-06-09 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
Holy SHIT that was so amazing and I loved your use of tense - just made it so much more visceral.

But, dude, I am so glad to have found this. And Porn DOES make everything better, especially when it's written like this.

May I please friend your journal? I would like to stalk fangirl on you now.

[identity profile] b0nnie-bee.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Damn. Sounding is a big kink of mine, and you've written it beautifully. I'm seriously impressed with the amount of emotion and sensation you've packed into such a short piece.

[identity profile] spn-j2fan.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
Damn! There needs to be an automatic warning for 2nd person POV slash porn! Now I'm reaching down for something I don't have!

Nope, not a problem. I've recovered. This was great! :D

[identity profile] mistyzeo.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*wiping up drool*

Wow, I just. Unf.

[identity profile] neros-violin.livejournal.com 2011-06-09 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
This was perfect for second person POV... it just ramped up the already incredible intensity another notch. And it showcased my favorite kind of D/s... where the trust is so apparent in every action and word... very very hot, bb, with your usual flawless style. <3

[identity profile] askellington.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
Sounding fic--I agree there just isn't enough of it. And definitely, it should all be this hot, and this beautifully written.

[identity profile] maerhysetc.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
Delicious is the right word for this! Artful and sexy, I really enjoyed this.

[identity profile] locknkey.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 06:06 am (UTC)(link)
So intimate and sensuous - lovely!

[identity profile] sam-dean-lover.livejournal.com 2011-06-10 09:59 am (UTC)(link)
*thud* *adds to mems*

[identity profile] simplybeing.livejournal.com 2011-06-11 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
DUDE.

I watched an insanely hot sounding clip the other day (out of curiousity, because I'd never seen one) and, like most things in life these days, immediately thought to myself, "I need me some J2 sounding fic!" Never in a million years did I expect to actually find any, but unf. Did I want it.

AND HOMG HERE IT IS. AND IT'S HOTTER THAN I EVER COULD HAVE IMAGINED.


You are seriously like, my favourite person ever right now. Good god, woman. <3

[identity profile] eternal-moonie.livejournal.com 2011-07-10 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Very DELICIOUS torment!!!

Great job!!

[identity profile] awennra.livejournal.com 2011-08-24 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Hot!