ext_23223 ([identity profile] phaballa.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mickeym 2007-12-31 11:03 pm (UTC)

No, the main narrative is written in the present tense, and he's remembering things that happened in the past, hence the past tense bits. It would be easier to demonstrate with a longer scene. There's definitely a difference and yes, I see it, but what you wrote made no sense. What I wrote was present tense with past tense flashbacks.

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