"C'mon, Sam," was all she got out before he grabbed his cock. He hissed something random that sounded like "Dee--" and arched. Everything that lead to this point, and specifically these lines...it's deadly & wicked & made my breath hitch.
"I wanna fuck you so bad," he says, licking the words into her skin.
"No," she moans, stripping off her t-shirt -- she's braless, and Sam's not surprised, not at all -- then settling her hands on his shoulders. Her breath is warm and moist against his ear when she whispers, "I'm gonna fuck you, Sam. Fuck you hard, make you come for me." Yeah, I nearly passed out. *flails*
"I want it," he breathes…and then the words tumble out in a rush. "Want your cock, Jess, please, give it to me, fuck me, make me take it--" It's incredibly hot, overwhelming almost, and yet...is it wrong that my heart breaks for him? I don't for a moment think that his relationship with Dean was a 'he made me take it' sort of one, y'know? But...he's hurting. And this appears to be the only way to stitch him back together. And...guh. (Seriously, I never quote the pr0ny bits back to an author. But I can't seem to help myself, I'm sorry!)
He groans when she tightens her grip on his hair, head straining back. Jess bites at his ear then whispers, "say it, Sam. Say his name."
"J-Jess, Jesus--"
"Say it, Sam. You know you need to. Let me hear you say it." That was it. May be one of the GUH-est thing I've ever read. *tries to remember to breathe* But I adore him for saying Dean's name, but keeping her in the forefront, too, saying her name in the same breath. I dunno, it's a small thing, but helps reveal his level of conflictedness, maybe?
And your last line. Jeeeeeez. That's...heavy. I read it twice & each time made me shiver.
*eyes novella & blushes* Sorry for the overly-wordiness--I just really dig your writing! :)
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"C'mon, Sam," was all she got out before he grabbed his cock. He hissed something random that sounded like "Dee--" and arched. Everything that lead to this point, and specifically these lines...it's deadly & wicked & made my breath hitch.
"I wanna fuck you so bad," he says, licking the words into her skin.
"No," she moans, stripping off her t-shirt -- she's braless, and Sam's not surprised, not at all -- then settling her hands on his shoulders. Her breath is warm and moist against his ear when she whispers, "I'm gonna fuck you, Sam. Fuck you hard, make you come for me." Yeah, I nearly passed out. *flails*
"I want it," he breathes…and then the words tumble out in a rush. "Want your cock, Jess, please, give it to me, fuck me, make me take it--" It's incredibly hot, overwhelming almost, and yet...is it wrong that my heart breaks for him? I don't for a moment think that his relationship with Dean was a 'he made me take it' sort of one, y'know? But...he's hurting. And this appears to be the only way to stitch him back together. And...guh. (Seriously, I never quote the pr0ny bits back to an author. But I can't seem to help myself, I'm sorry!)
He groans when she tightens her grip on his hair, head straining back. Jess bites at his ear then whispers, "say it, Sam. Say his name."
"J-Jess, Jesus--"
"Say it, Sam. You know you need to. Let me hear you say it."
That was it. May be one of the GUH-est thing I've ever read. *tries to remember to breathe* But I adore him for saying Dean's name, but keeping her in the forefront, too, saying her name in the same breath. I dunno, it's a small thing, but helps reveal his level of conflictedness, maybe?
And your last line. Jeeeeeez. That's...heavy. I read it twice & each time made me shiver.
*eyes novella & blushes* Sorry for the overly-wordiness--I just really dig your writing! :)