ext_19230 ([identity profile] nyerca.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mickeym 2008-07-12 10:09 pm (UTC)

What a lovely story! You did an excellent job of capturing the feelings between Sam and Dean - very sweet, loving, and genuine. A very romantic love story. I was crushed when Dean died. Seriously, I was like, "WHAT?!" I saw there were still a couple of chapters left and I toyed with not finishing it. I wasn't sure I could bear so much of the story left with a devastated, Dean-less Sam. :( But the letter, personal effects, and Dean's journal really sustained me. It was nice to get some more of his words, some more of how much he treasured Sam and their relationship.

And it was hard but it ended up being ok watching Sam alone. I think it was important for him to realize he could live without Dean and go on and do good things. But I'm so thrilled he didn't have to! I was shocked Dean was dead and then shocked that he was alive. Yay! I'm glad to read you are considering adding a bit more to the story though, a return to South Dakota. This story was a huge accomplishment and it feels ungrateful asking for more, but their reunion was too brief! I needed MORE Sam and Dean back together at the end. :) Thank you for the beautiful story!

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