(typing from the floor, since you have melted my spine, and I can no longer remain upright in my chair)

Wheee! Mission accomplished! Because you KNOW our goal was to have fandom sliding out of its chairs, bones no longer able to support them... ;)

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! Wow--really. I am pleased as all get out that you like the voices in the story, that they work for you :) And believe me when I say...it's interesting, very interesting, to work with this power dynamic. Because there are multiple layers of Dom and sub going on here, and everything needs to be balanced. We thought it worked -- it's wonderful to hear it did! Thank you :)